Hand Drawn Map - Revision history

Dan at 11:39, 6 April 2020

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Dan at 17:55, 3 April 2020

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Dan at 17:42, 3 April 2020

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Dan at 17:31, 3 April 2020

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Dan at 17:28, 3 April 2020

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Dan at 17:25, 3 April 2020

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 '''Author(s):''' [[Brother Number 3]]
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 ▪ [[Locate the Landmarks]]
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 ==Tasks==
-Picking up the map, will start the task [[Hand Drawn Map (Task)|Hand Drawn Map]], and reading it will complete it.
+Picking up the map is the first step of the task [[Hand Drawn Map (Task)|Hand Drawn Map]]; and reading it will complete it.
 Reading the map also will add two new tasks:

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 ▪ [[Locate the Landmarks]]
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 ==Tasks==
-Picking up the map, will start the quest [[Hand Drawn Map (Task)|Hand Drawn Map]].
+Picking up the map, will start the task [[Hand Drawn Map (Task)|Hand Drawn Map]], and reading it will complete it.
 [[Category:Documents]]

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 ======Page 2======
 [[File:Dont Blab.jpg|112x112px|alt=|border|thumb]]
-On the backside of the map, there is an illustration of a woman making a "hush" gesture wearing the distinctive [[Community]]'s white bandana. As the other Trial Maps, the illustration is similar to propaganda flyers of the Soviet-era. This one in particular is inspired by the famous "Don't Blab!" poster.
+On the backside of the map, there is an illustration of a woman making a "hush" gesture wearing the distinctive [[Community]]'s white bandana. As the other Trial Maps, the illustration is similar to propaganda flyers of the Soviet-era. This one in particular is inspired by the famous "''Don't Blab!''" poster.
 ==Tasks==

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 This is the first document that can be collected in Die Young. In the introduction sequence, an unseen person drops the map into [[The Well|the well]] in which Daphne has been left. The document has two sides: on the front (page 1) there's an hand drawn map of the first area of the game with some red marks; on the backside (page 2), there is an illustration of a woman with a covered face making a "hush" gesture.
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+======Page 1======
 A red mark over a well shows Daphne's '''starting location'''. Like other [[Documents#Trial Maps|Trial Maps]], it shows the '''surrounding landmarks''' ([[Twin Houses]], [[The Watchtower]], [[Temple Ruins]], [[The Manor Farm]], [[The House on the Beach]], [[The Coastal Tower]], [[The Pinewood]], [[The Mountain Pass]], [[The Gate]] and [[The High Tower]]), a '''[[Getting started#Water Sources .28Drinking.29|water source]]''' (the water pump near the Twin Houses), '''directions''' to reach the [[Bull Door]], and the '''final destination''': [[The High Tower]].
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-[[File:Dont Blab.jpg|frame|112x112px]]
+[[File:Dont Blab.jpg|112x112px|alt=|border|thumb]]
 On the backside of the map, there is an illustration of a woman making a "hush" gesture wearing the distinctive [[Community]]'s white bandana. As the other Trial Maps, the illustration is similar to propaganda flyers of the Soviet-era. This one in particular is inspired by the famous "Don't Blab!" poster.
-== Tasks ==
+==Tasks==
 Picking up the map, will start the quest [[Hand Drawn Map (Task)|Hand Drawn Map]].
 [[Category:Documents]]

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 ==Description==
-This document is the first received in the game. An unseen person drops the map into the well in which Daphne has been left. It is identical to the other maps except for what appears to be a torn piece missing from the upper left corner. There is a red marker indicating what is presumably the well Daphne finds herself in.
+This is the first document that can be collected in Die Young. In the introduction sequence, an unseen person drops the map into [[The Well|the well]] in which Daphne has been left. The document has two sides: on the front (page 1) there's an hand drawn map of the first area of the game with some red marks; on the backside (page 2), there is an illustration of a woman with a covered face making a "hush" gesture.
-On the reverse side of the map is an illustration of a man or woman with a covered face making a "hush" gesture.
+====== Page 1 ======
-Picking up the map, will start the quest [[Hand Drawn Map (Quest)|Hand Drawn Map]].
+====== Page 2 ======
 [[Category:Documents]]